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Numbers, dates and times that cannot be misread

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1 minute 53 seconds. Captions are on. Narrated slides. The narration is a synthesized voice; a recorded voice replaces it later.

Write dates with the weekday and year, avoid 12 a.m. and 12 p.m., say what a deadline means and give money and phone numbers in full.

Notes

Step 1 of 7

Start here

A misread word costs a resident a minute. A misread date or time costs them a missed hearing, a late fee or a wasted trip. Numbers are the part of a notice people act on, so they get the most care.

Step 2 of 7

Dates: weekday, month, day, year

Write dates so nobody has to work them out:

  • Tuesday, May 5, 2026

Each part does a job. The month name avoids the 5/6 problem: in the United States that is May 6, and in much of the world it is June 5. The year keeps an old page from looking current. The weekday is a check: if you typed "Tuesday, May 6," a careful reader will notice the mismatch and ask.

Inside a long notice, the weekday can drop after the first mention, as long as the date stays.

Step 3 of 7

Never write a relative date on a web page

"Tomorrow," "next week" and "this Friday" are right only on the day they were written. A web page stays up. A resident who finds it in a search three weeks later reads "this Friday" as a date that has not happened yet.

Use the date. If you want the friendliness of "this Friday," say both: "this Friday, May 8."

Step 4 of 7

Times: noon, midnight and a.m. and p.m.

The National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) says 12 a.m. and 12 p.m. "are ambiguous and should not be used." People disagree about which is noon.

  • Write noon and midnight in words.
  • For deadlines, NIST suggests 11:59 p.m. or 12:01 a.m. so the day is clear: "by 11:59 p.m. Friday, May 15."
  • Write a.m. and p.m. the same way every time, and drop ":00" when you can: 9 a.m., 5:30 p.m.

For a range, use "to": "9 a.m. to 5 p.m.," and "Monday to Friday." A hyphen between times is easy to miss on a phone and is read out oddly by some screen readers.

Step 5 of 7

Deadlines need three facts

A deadline is a date, a time and a rule about what "by" means.

  • "Due Friday" leaves out two of them.
  • "Must arrive at Town Hall by 4:30 p.m. Friday, May 15, 2026" covers all three.
  • For mail, say which: "postmarked by" or "received by." They are different deadlines.
  • For online forms, say whose clock counts, if residents in other time zones apply: "11:59 p.m. Eastern time."

Step 6 of 7

Money, counts and phone numbers

  • Money: "$25," not "twenty-five dollars." Say what it covers: "$25 per dog, per year."
  • Numbers people act on are numerals: "3 copies," "bring 2 forms of ID." Numerals stand out when someone scans.
  • Phone numbers in full, with the area code: 555-555-0142. A phone number on a web page is something people tap, so include the area code even if everyone is local.
  • Addresses with the room or entrance: "Town Hall, 10 Main Street, Room 104 (use the side door on Elm Street)."

Step 7 of 7

One fact, one place

When a date appears on several pages, it will eventually be wrong on one of them. Keep each date in one place, such as the event calendar or one meeting page, and link to it from the others. If you must repeat it, keep a list of where, and update all of them together.

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Transcript

Synthesized narration; a recorded voice replaces it later.

  1. 0:00A misread word costs a resident a minute.
  2. 0:02A misread date or time costs them a missed hearing, a late fee or a wasted trip.
  3. 0:08Write dates with the weekday, the month name, the day and the year: Tuesday, May 5, 2026.
  4. 0:15The month name avoids the 5/6 problem.
  5. 0:18The year keeps an old page from looking current.
  6. 0:20The weekday is a check.
  7. 0:23Never write a relative date on a web page.
  8. 0:26Tomorrow, next week and this Friday are right only on the day they were written.
  9. 0:30If you want the friendliness, say both: this Friday, May 8.
  10. 0:36NIST says 12 a.m. and 12 p.m. are ambiguous and should not be used.
  11. 0:40Write noon and midnight in words.
  12. 0:42For deadlines, use 11:59 p.m. or 12:01 a.m. For a range, use to: 9 a.m. to 5 p.m.
  13. 0:51A deadline needs three facts: a date, a time, and what by means.
  14. 0:55Must arrive at Town Hall by 4:30 p.m. Friday, May 15, 2026.
  15. 1:01For mail, say postmarked by or received by.
  16. 1:05They are different deadlines.
  17. 1:08Money as numerals, with what it covers: $25 per dog, per year.
  18. 1:13Numbers people act on as numerals: bring 2 forms of ID.
  19. 1:17Phone numbers in full, with the area code.
  20. 1:19Addresses with the room or entrance.
  21. 1:23One fact, one place.
  22. 1:25When a date appears on several pages, it will eventually be wrong on one of them.
  23. 1:30Keep each date in one place, and link to it from the others.
  24. 1:34Your task.
  25. 1:35Open one notice or deadline.
  26. 1:37Rewrite every date as weekday, month, day and year.
  27. 1:41Replace any 12 a.m. or 12 p.m. Make each deadline say the time, and received or postmarked.
  28. 1:47Search your site for tomorrow and next week, fix one, and publish.

Task

Your task at your institution

Quiz

4 questions. Choose one answer for each, then check them. Each answer shows its reason.

1. A permit window closes at the end of Friday. How should you write the deadline?
2. Which date is hardest to misread?
3. Why avoid 'next Tuesday' or 'tomorrow' on a web page?
4. A form is due by Friday. What else does the reader need to know?
Show the answers
  1. C. 11:59 p.m. Friday, May 15, 2026. NIST calls 12 a.m. and 12 p.m. ambiguous and suggests 11:59 p.m. or 12:01 a.m. for deadlines.
  2. B. Tuesday, May 5, 2026. The weekday, month name, day and year leave nothing to guess, and the weekday catches typos.
  3. B. Pages stay up after the day passes, and the words become wrong. A relative date is only right on the day it was written.
  4. B. Whether it must arrive by then or be postmarked by then, and the time. Received by and postmarked by are different deadlines. Say which, and give the time.